Random manga girl angel

First up, i'd just like to say - i really like her hair. You've obviously taken care to shade it so it seems like individual strands, rather than just one massive clump. I would note, though, that the side of her fringe to her left isn't hanging quite right - it would look more natural if it hung a little straighter, rather than curling in to her face so much.

The anatomy and pose are mostly well done. I think you could perhaps make her elbows more obvious - the arm actually gets a little wider around that point, rather than going straight down. Also, her left thumb - the line where it joins the hand should be a little shorter, and perhaps the line of her first finger should carry on a little way up her thumb. I say that because, at this angle, the thumb would be "underneath" the rest of her hand.

The only other thing I would pick up on is the wings - I appreciate that they are tricky, and I'm not too hot on drawing them myself, but if the wing on her left were a little narrower, closer in to her, it would give a better impression of the angle that you're looking at her from.

Other than that, I do quite like this. Her clothes and hair are done really well, and the expression on her face is good too. If you want, I would be willing to run off a couple of quick sketches to make my points a little clearer - just ask.

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